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Tuesday, September 16, 2008

The Pig


The Pig

Chapter 3: Huts on the Beach

Perspective: Jack

We were in the bushes and we were waiting for a while. Then I here’d a noise and it was coming from the bush I knew there was a pig in the bushes somewhere I just didn't know where. The wind picked up and then Piggy shouted and a remote bird that I have never seen before came out of the bushes. Then I here’d a noise that sounded like a pig I immediately through the spear without looking and it went into the bushes with great compulsion. Of course I missed and I ran and picked up the spear and chased the pigs but I didn't hit them they out ran me.

Later that day I was back at the camp and there was only two hut built and Ralph was freaking out. He was mad because they have been working for 5 days and they only got two huts done. The huts don’t even look like they could hold up against the rain. They have a lot of vicissitudes building the huts. But I didn’t pay too much attention to that because I was trying to figure out how I could catch that pig. I needed to catch it or everyone would think I’m not helping. The jungle was opaque I couldn’t hardly see. The leaves rapt the sun the pigs were also too fast for me.

I finally got the idea I could put a barb on the end of the spear. When I said that everyone looked at me like they didn’t even care they all wanted to build the huts. Well at least I solved the problem now Simon was going to go out to the jungle. Once everyone realized that he was gone in the jungle I was behind him then all of a sudden the tendrils closed in on me and the sun went down. It was almost magical the stars came out and I didn’t know what was going on. I felt like something was watching me, Simon was gone.

2 comments:

Noah hummanities said...

i like the fact that the vocab words didnt have anything to do with what it had said in the book. it shows that you know the true meaning of the word. good job


-noah

charisse said...

I like how you described what exactly happened in the chapter. I also like how what noah said; you put the words that weren't in where the book was which showed you understood them well.