Rescued
Chapter 12: Cry of the Hunters
Perspective: Simon
Jack had gone crazy he was chasing down Ralph he was trying to catch him. He already killed Piggy. He was making the hunters where clothing that looked like they were Indians. Ralph looked terrified he was hiding in the jungle. Jack found out and he was telling the hunters to burn down the jungle so that it would smoke Ralph out. I couldn't believe that Jack turned into this beastie. Well I guess that I was right about how everyone has a beastie inside them. Jack just can't control it.
I felt bad for Ralph but somehow I knew that he was going to make it back home safely. Ralph was scared when he saw that the jungle was on fire. so he ran out of the jungle he was fighting the hunters who were now savages. they formed a cordon but Ralph made it through the hunters he was running and they were fighting him with the spears. the hunters made ululations. Ralph diddled them.
Ralph ran into a man that was standing over him he was wearing a drill suit with epaulettes. Ralph told him about what the other boys who were chasing him and then he took the man to them. the boys started to cry when they saw the man from the army. they were all embarrassed they started to cry because they were acting like savages. I was happy that they all got rescued.
4 comments:
I like how you said every little detail because, since you were Simon it was like you were just floating around, and thats what it seemed like. I also liked how you put all the emotions from the boys even though they were crazy they can still cry! great job!
Ben Stein
You are very detailed and you describe everything very well. I think that is very good because it helps you get a mental picture in your head. You also use a lot of emotion in your writing.Good Job!
Daniel::
I really like how you were describing what was going on even though you were Simon, who's dead... But anyways, you did really good. I enjoyed reading your post especially when you were describing the evil side of Jack coming out. GOOD JOB :]
I liked how you said Jack mad them look like Indians. I like how you had a lot to say. You were really descriptive about the vocab words and about the chapter.
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